英文版
1、
I would keep the summer at seven,
when I caught a cicada in my hand.
I would be forever at seventeen,
when I kiss him on the face.
But I never.
2、
When I was seven,
I caught the cicada,
It would keep the summer.
When I was seventeen,
I kissed his face,
We would be in love forever.
All are lose.
3、
To see a ciada in summer,
one season in my seven years；
To kiss his face with my love，
a life was my seventeen years.
诗经版
子扑蝉鸣，四季皆夏；
子闻桃花，刹那芳华。
楚辞体：
今日蝉闹兮，君欲戏之。
越螳雀后兮，幸握蝉夏嬉之。
得蝉鸣掌中，未知一夏。
今日与君同行兮，得君凝之？
面若桃红时，岂君为兮！
朝朝暮暮为君兮，君笑彼时非今日。
五言
喜夏阳恋蝉，一鸣惊四季。
同伴唤来粘，笑声沁朱明。
竹马如夏来，蒙羞掩柴扉
诺死生不负，转瞬冬寒时。
绝句版：
豆蔻初逢夏蝉鸣，以是朱明握掌中；
人面桃花春风迎，吾心转头即成空。
评论：
林零玖2016-10-26
“子扑蝉鸣，四季皆夏”最喜欢这句。
仙茅之2015-02-04
个人认为诗经版的最好
木一2015-01-27
随手一写就写着好，好谦虚…
临水2015-01-24
第一段英文最好，朴实自然。后面的有用力斧凿痕迹。
漂泊四方的流浪汉回复 (作者) 2017-02-16
妹子长得好漂亮啊，不过Eng2有语法错误，Eng1中的forever是副词，不能放在be之后，感觉eternal比较好。
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